Implements of Greater Fate
“They look like big, strong hands, don’t they?
I always thought that’s what they were.”
– The Rockbiter, Neverending Story
wisdom has a way of dismantling
definitions; time has a way of taking
it all away.
i woke with intent cradled in my palm,
a fragile, pregnant creature, hoping to give birth
to a new day.
like Cronus, i gathered the implements of my craft
and stepped out into this new yard, open eyed
for the harvest.
bounty. creation of something new from something
old, shearing the gold from green, shaping the pasture
in which i, my sons, and our guests could find peace.
the grating whirr of my electric mower
interrupted the solace of the morning, yes, but
i saw what lay before me. and it was good.
i settled into action,
sweat,
thoughtlessness.
when they leaped from the grass, from a hollow beneath
dead brown, it was as if the earth had emptied itself, giving birth
from nothing. absolutely nothing. i stood before magic.
the mower hiccupped. stalled out. i took a photo of them:
three tiny bunnies, the size of a mouse (undoubtedly the babies
of the large rabbit i’d seen earlier in the week).
and i smiled and i giggled as i chased them
from this place. drove them from their chosen home
(but just for a little while. a little while).
i settled into action, again,
and sweat,
and thoughtlessness.
so that when the mower jumped, coughed, choked,
my first thought was too late for his last. the fourth pup,
hidden, unseen (unseeable) still in that same hollow.
until me. until i came, not in the power of Cronus, but
with the death and the cessation of time, of, and for, his forebearer,
Chronos.
blessed are we, above all creation, perhaps, with choice
and free will. but what i learned, as i stared at what could not be
seen (any more) as a rabbit,
what i felt, between the twisting and visceral gordian knots
of my stomach, was this: we are not always what we wish
to be, to do.
sometimes we are made more. made less. by powers
larger than ourselves. sometimes
we are the implements
of greater fate.
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“what i felt, between the twisting and visceral gordian knots
of my stomach, was this: we are not always what we wish
to be, to do.
sometimes we are made more. made less. by powers
larger than ourselves. sometimes
we are the implements
of greater fate.”
Well said. Deeply sorry to hear that you and the tiny creature experienced this.
Thank you, H.A.
It stuck with me all day ☹️
Wow, this is amazing! Great story.
Thank you, Victoria. Glad you enjoyed.
Great narrative power cast in a Greek mold. the simple line “i stood before magic” is magic. The opening line grabs, stops, then forces you forward. Good stuff.
Was quite struck by yours today, too, Bernie. I was in a weird funk the rest of the day because of it—if I never got back to comment, know it was amazing.
I thought Cronus was such an odd choice for an otherwise lovely image—until the conclusion. I hate being an implement of a larger fate.
Fantastic poem.
Chronos (or the amalgamation of the two different but blurred figures) was already on my mind because of a tv show that alluded to him, last night.
Sometimes things come together that way. And you have to grab their crossing.
This wonderful line came back to me when I got to the end:
“i woke with intent cradled in my palm, / a fragile, pregnant creature, hoping to give birth / to a new day.”
Good. I had to sit with the feelings for a while today so…by the time I did, the end was firmly in my mind before the beginning was written. I’m glad it circled around that way.
Joseph, What an intricate weave of stories! I laughed to think of you giggling and chasing baby bunnies – kind of like a cartoon. The poem was thought provoking and will stay with me for awhile!
Thank you, Sylvia.
I wish it wouldn’t me, but it is.
I thought to add a trigger warning but…didn’t.
awoke with the ancient appetite
sometimes eaten, sometimes is born
chaos bound in unformed flesh.
( i think a baby rabbit is a kit, or kitten… ‘the fourth kit hidden,/unseen’.. might be a smoother roll than ‘pup’)
or kitten- would be a lot of doubble consonants ( which i love)
You’re right! Thank you👏🏼
Isn’t that the struggle… Taking joy when we are exactly who we like to be or think we are … Facing the terror of not always being what we wish to be.
What a way to take the experience and work it into reflection
Thank you, Arwen.
Yup. Obviously I didn’t MEAN to chop up a bunny. But I should have checked if there were more. Even thought in the moment I should. But was in LaLa Land.