In the dream is a place
called the White House Food Shop:
It was our family’s livelihood
and the place we all worked
as kids.
(Even the youngest
carried empties redeemed
for pennies to the back room.)
I learned how to make change
counting backwards, a skill
not needed today when a machine
adds for us. But I can still do it.
In the dream I wait on customers
but I cannot remember what anything
costs. I cannot add up the bill,
and Dad is busy. I think I might
make up the prices, but hesitate.
In the dream I am never certain.
In the dream it is closing time
but the store fills up with customers:
This is the legacy of Dad
who never turned anyone away
(even the man who brought in a box
of television tubes to test in the “U-Test-Em”
machine Dad installed to make a few extra bucks,
on a Sunday afternoon when it was time to go).
That was my Father and I hated to disappoint him
by my dreamtime ignorance. Even when i awake
I am not certain and
I hate to disappoint him.
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I love the specifics in this poem that show your admiration for your father’s goodness. I’m pretty sure you do not disappoint. Beautiful!
I love the picture this poem paints of your dad both through both specifics and “show, don’t tell.”
the repetition calls to mind how when I think of a parent, in particular, my memories are rooted in a very specific place and doing a specific action, a kind of synecdoche
Lots said in these two lines: I am not certain and/I hate to disappoint him.
I love the dreamlike setting. I love the specifics. Happy Father’s Day?
The ? is supposed to be a !
Thanks, I guess the wish is appropriate. I’ve been a “Father” for 50 years this month. Thanks for your comment!
This is a moving piece. I especially liked “a skill “not needed today when a machine/
adds for us. But I can still do it.” Those skills, I believe, are still relevant and important. But also “This is the legacy of Dad/who never turned anyone away” was very strong and telling of his character.
Thank you, Eric.