Is it time to smoke inside yet
At the end of the night,
when a nervous, maternal,
eternal God must
snuff out the stars for
fear of a treacly factory fire, strewn
in that last frail gasp of darkness
grasping at what’s to be swept beneath
giggly pink gone proudly gouging blue;
you just might feel them,
cocked beneath burned out feathers
of leathery Cygnus, tying
Orion’s black, dry-rotted buskins together to
sling against crinkling threads of the shriveling
firmament singed into blistering licorice,
reeking of cherry-streaked tresses and tar—
the line cooks weighing their
tallied up burns and scars against
pigeons and cormorants chiseled from
silvery surges stripped from diminishing
cherries, like sinew uncoils in smoke.
Like seizing stars,
They’ll wheeze now a glib Finnish angry men’s choir
that drunken Sibelius must’ve mistaken for
swan-shaped smears seen summoning
snow from a salt flat.
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it feels like a thousand worms are dancing together in this tongue-twisty poem
I love the sounds here, especially the sibiilant alliterative esses in the third stanza and conclusion
this…a more straight curve
to crookedness
ahg…that treacle factory fire
only smokers know
Swan shaped smears! Love the line cooks mixed up with the drunken Finnish Sibelius-led choir imagery. A grand slam of a poem! I’d relish reading this one aloud!
Also the nervous maternal God… the constellations and other sky treatments—so many great lines!!!!