It’s a satellite, not a star
the volunteer astronomer told the crowd
because a star scintillates in a fixed position in the sky
while a satellite floats effortlessly
along a single, uninterrupted trail
& the orbiter’s light doesn’t pulse
because it isn’t alive;
its man-made construction
reflects sunlight,
gifting us an artificial reproduction
of solar radiation
yet,
we are dazzled
and still gaze with wonder
24 thoughts on "It’s a satellite, not a star"
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This is awesome commentary on the state of humanity. Aren’t we all dazzled by the wrong things?
I prefer your interpretation of this to the literal experience I wrote about. Chelsie, you’re incredible! Thanks for reading.
Oh, I love Chelsie’s read of this. Dazzled by the wrong things. Also, the idea of a star scintillating. Tight, alive writing.
Me, too. I love her interpretation far more than the literal moment from a few summers ago. Thanks for reading and for finding strength in this piece.
there are two skys and you have a beautiful gl2aming story in both.
Very very good writing.
Poet of the stars 😀
“Poet of the stars”— if only! Thanks so much for reading and for always being kind and supportive, Coleman!
I love this one. It pairs nicely with the poetGPT piece you had the other day.
Thanks, Jeremy. I am now seeing the connection between the two pieces. Between Chelsie’s and your comments, I can see them pairing well. Just one of the countless reasons why I love being part of this community. Thanks for reading and for showing me that connection!
I like being able to visualize the “single, uninterrupted trail” in the last stanza emulating a sense of wonder
Thanks, Gaby! Stargazing in a dark sky park is something else, especially for this New Yorker. We even marvel at the satellites.
Plato’s Cave!!!!
For sure! Thanks for reading, Manny.
Yes
and when you see
Musk’s string of pearls
(starlink)
you know something
isn’t right.
100%. Thanks for reading, Jim!
This taught me something and is itself a thoughtful reflection on our limited wisdom. Thanks for sharing this.
Thank you, Nancy! Glad you found so much in this little poem. 💜
I love being dazzled!! Made me think of Hamlet – “There are more things in heaven and earth, Horatio, than are dreamt of in your philosophy.”
Same! A good dazzling is such a joy. A connection to the Bard?!?! Wow! Thank you, Sylvia. 💜
I love Chelsie’s read of this as well “dazzled by all the wrong things”
Love: “scintillates” and having it in italics…it pulses.
Thanks, Pam! Yes, Chelsie’s read elevates the poem for sure. I am glad you like the formatting. 💜
The spare lines allows your work choices to dazzle us. I love how you italicized “scintillates” to let it shine and let this scene dazzle us!
Thanks, Shaun! I appreciate your kind words. Glad the momwnt dazzled you! Thank you for reading.
I love the way to distilled the astronomer’s talk to a single thought that resonated with you. Well done!
Thanks, Lee. It was an unexpected moment amidst the sky gazing and listening to his fascinating talk. It broke my heart a bit. Thank you for reading and seeing this poem for the lasting moment that it is.