Jacob’s Ladder
The packhouse bulging in early September,
my mother takes over, checking our work
as we strip the tobacco leaves off the sticks
they’d been lashed to & cured on,
each length of twine unstrung by hand
like pulling out stitches, each leaf laid
on a big cardboard mold like her springform
cake pan, the bundles stuffed into burlap sheets
tied off at the top like a hobo’s sack.
On breaks over Sun Drop or Nehi Grape,
Mama uses loops of castoff twine
to teach us the old cat’s cradle tricks:
Crow’s Feet, Cut Your Head Off, Fish in a Dish
& my favorite, Jacob’s Ladder—twelve
quick motions, ring-finger-middle-finger-thumb,
a flourish at the end & there: heaven’s
rickety staircase, my hands on the banister,
at the top of it my inheritance.
21 thoughts on "Jacob’s Ladder"
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This is wonderful! Fantastic ending.
Thanks, Chelsie! I have really loved your poems this month!
flawless!
Thanks Dustin!
what a wonderful mom–both practical and captivating
Thanks, Gaby! Yes she had her moments. She was a taskmaster but also could have fun at times.
So beautifully written! I had to catch my breath.
Thanks Linda! It was so good being with you & Coleman at Shelda’s last night. We went far afield: Dickinson! John Donne! I should write a poem called Git ‘er Donne! 😏
Masterful
touches base with childhood
& heritage
Thanks, Jim! I wonder if it makes much sense to people from the Kentucky burley tobacco curing tradition, which is so different from N.C.
I had forgotten all about the strings and Jacob’s Latter. Thanks for taking me back. I also thought the last line nailed it.
Thanks Wayne!
Amazing! I remember going into tobacco barns in Virginia as a young girl and being awed. Never knew the mechanics of the task until now.
Love:
each length of twine unstrung by hand
like pulling out stitches, each leaf laid
on a big cardboard mold like her springform
cake pan, the bundles stuffed into burlap sheets
tied off at the top like a hobo’s sack.
You land this exquisite gem of a poem well with the last stanza!
Thanks, Pam! It’s a bygone era—tobacco is now processed in an almost completely automated way in N.C. And the crop itself is much diminished there. A lost world, mostly as it should be.
Thanks for this gorgeous re-creation of a moment in time.
I’ve so enjoyed your poems this month. Isn’t Lexpomo grand?
Thanks, Karen!
Ditto! And yes ❤️
That ending two lines tho 😭😭😭💯
Thanks, Joseph! Good to see you at the pub the other day!
Wonderful details, effective ending
Thanks Mike!
Your tobacco world poems are cinematic, Kevin. In sepia. Loved this very much.