Jacob’s Ladder
The packhouse bulging in early September,
my mother takes over, checking our work
as we strip the tobacco leaves off the sticks
they’d been lashed to & cured on,
each length of twine unstrung by hand
like pulling out stitches, each leaf laid
on a big cardboard mold like her springform
cake pan, the bundles stuffed into burlap sheets
tied off at the top like a hobo’s sack.
On breaks over Sun Drop or Nehi Grape,
Mama uses loops of castoff twine
to teach us the old cat’s cradle tricks:
Crow’s Feet, Cut Your Head Off, Fish in a Dish
& my favorite, Jacob’s Ladder—twelve
quick motions, ring-finger-middle-finger-thumb,
a flourish at the end & there: heaven’s
rickety staircase, my hands on the banister,
at the top of it my inheritance.
21 thoughts on "Jacob’s Ladder"
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This is wonderful! Fantastic ending.
Thanks, Chelsie! I have really loved your poems this month!
flawless!
Thanks Dustin!
what a wonderful mom–both practical and captivating
Thanks, Gaby! Yes she had her moments. She was a taskmaster but also could have fun at times.
So beautifully written! I had to catch my breath.
Thanks Linda! It was so good being with you & Coleman at Shelda’s last night. We went far afield: Dickinson! John Donne! I should write a poem called Git ‘er Donne! ?
Masterful
touches base with childhood
& heritage
Thanks, Jim! I wonder if it makes much sense to people from the Kentucky burley tobacco curing tradition, which is so different from N.C.
I had forgotten all about the strings and Jacob’s Latter. Thanks for taking me back. I also thought the last line nailed it.
Thanks Wayne!
Amazing! I remember going into tobacco barns in Virginia as a young girl and being awed. Never knew the mechanics of the task until now.
Love:
each length of twine unstrung by hand
like pulling out stitches, each leaf laid
on a big cardboard mold like her springform
cake pan, the bundles stuffed into burlap sheets
tied off at the top like a hobo’s sack.
You land this exquisite gem of a poem well with the last stanza!
Thanks, Pam! It’s a bygone era—tobacco is now processed in an almost completely automated way in N.C. And the crop itself is much diminished there. A lost world, mostly as it should be.
Thanks for this gorgeous re-creation of a moment in time.
I’ve so enjoyed your poems this month. Isn’t Lexpomo grand?
Thanks, Karen!
Ditto! And yes ❤️
That ending two lines tho ????
Thanks, Joseph! Good to see you at the pub the other day!
Wonderful details, effective ending
Thanks Mike!
Your tobacco world poems are cinematic, Kevin. In sepia. Loved this very much.