Jim Takes the Christmas Tree Out
Mozart’s Jupiter on the radio
the idea to take the tree out
of the planter that sits
on the patio outside
the sliding glass door
that faces the sunrise occurs
he turns the classical station
off and steps out to overcast,
Jupiter hidden from him
like a previous life
exubrant with affair,
pulls the single strand
of white lights from the withered
cedar, yanks the prickly bark
to carry over to the compost
…remembers those days
when he always slept naked
with all the lights off
in the dark, so dark even
Venus was enough of a night-lite
now age, circulation, bad eyes
conjugates into a subjunctive mood
where even in June he needs
a sweater for his cold bones
and the patio Christmas lights
to see his way for his nightly
trips to the toilet
he used to say Christmas lights
left on
were the reason for strip mines
in Harlan County
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Jupiter has dual caring here as a planet and apiece of music. I love how this poem mixes the mundane and the cosmic. That covers all the basics!
I really like the current of nostalgia running through this. And this line, which blew my socks off:
Jupiter hidden from him
like a previous life
exubrant with affair,
i like the dressing and undressing here…
undecided state of dress..
I appreciate the candor of your poems, especially that you don’t get schmaltzy about aging
That last line is so good: rueful and funny. I also admired “Jupiter hidden from him/like a previous life…”
Yes, Jupiter’s will be done.
And I really like the use of ” withered cedar ”
This feels like a home.
Agree with others- well done ! Aging and Christmas trees!
bad eyes conjugates into a subjunctive mood where even in June he needs a sweater!
Amazing!
As someone who left Christmas trees up past the “correct” time of taking down, I appreciate the life you give to the withered tree and your connection to it. Stellar!
I agree with others and I am seeing some of this aging myself. Especially eyesight.
Well done.