Kerstin Keeps Bees
She went to a wedding
where only the bride’s mother
was known to her, a stranger
to the souls who came to push
the teenagers’ canoe into
the backwater of their lives.
She wore a blue-laced dress
in a sea of denim and a city sway
amid a marriage party in camo.
She looked up from the girl’s
unexpected belly to see sparse
fields with thin cattle, two trucks
down on their axels, a hive body
on the front porch, somebody’s
baby in a shitty pamper, the distant
stack of the coal plant downstream
of the river. The thrown garter
glanced off her shoulder, landed
in the dust, motes swirled around
like a medieval fair and all the fair
ladies seemed blanched. After
a piece of the fallen cake, she heard
the mother’s voice rise as in prayer:
Kerstin keeps bees
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Fantastic!
All the fair ladies seemed blanched
Pretty darn good
So true it hurts way down where poems are born. I expect that was its origin, too.
Bruce Florence
Lovely detail. Attention to detail is one of your great strengths.
The mother struggles with the disparate identities of her daughter. This plays like a movie, with recognizable characters and their stories in the first twenty frames.Good poem!
Pushing the canoe into the “backwater of their lives” set me up for the laugh at the “blue-laced dress” “amid a marriage party in camo.”
Loved: “the backwater of their lives” and ” a hive body on the front porch”
Stunning.
I loved the hive body on the front porch.
I’ve enjoyed reading all your work, Jim.
double likewise
The stranger (bride’s friend?) sees the hopelessness of the situation so plainly – it’s heartbreaking. “fallen cake” sort of sums it up – great metaphor! This poem is so poignant, so vividly described! You are a master for details!