Kneading
It takes more than simply slicing
bread, slattering it with butter while
it’s piping hot. That’s the easy
part, of course. Immediate
satisfaction is not what you seek.
Slowly sifting flour, patiently
waiting for yeast to rise, proof
dough requires gentle kneading
before baking to perfection. Crust
protects soft crumb, inner portion
only your partner knows. Perhaps
you prefer unleavened, unless
baking challah, leaving a piece
behind. Accept gluten and scores
as cuts we carry, external scars
enhance character, inviting
your beloved to fill cracks
with love you offer each other.
It’s really that simple if you
let it. It only takes practice,
time, patience, and love
you’ve found with each other
bound by tying apron strings,
exchanging vows, sealed
with a kiss after rings slide
on fingers. Bands you’ll forget
to remove when baking
because you’ll never want
to take them off, symbol
of eternal commitment
lasting longer than heating
an oven, kneading a loaf,
sharing piping hot magic
composed of four ingredients
when it only takes two. Groom
and groom perfect union
as you’ve ignited a fire
prepared to bake a lifetime
of memories, remembering
commitment of matrimony.
18 thoughts on "Kneading"
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This should not be content warning. Sigh.
Love how you built the metaphor. What a sweet poem!
Thank you. It’s a bridal shower gift. I hope the grooms like it.
I was wondering about the content warning. Was I missing the traumatic content? 😏 Anyhow beautiful poem.
I fucked up. I didn’t mean to check the content warning and couldn’t get in to remove it. Sigh. There’s nothing traumatic about this love poem. xo
Hey! I think they removed the content warning for me. Hooray! And shew. I learned my lesson. No box! No check box! 😉
Love the metaphor and double entendre of kneading
Thank you, Pat. xo
“unless baking challah, leaving a piece behind”
you brought back very sweet memories. thank you.
Thank you! I’m proud of the research I did. Their wedding will be a traditional Jewish wedding, so you know I wanted to get every detail right. xo
Only your partner knows.
So true
…what they don’t know (yet). They’ll be married this September. xo
What a lovely poem, Elizabeth! It’s a braiding of love and cooking like the challah bread. Like the part about forgetting to take off the rings when baking – something most bakers can relate to.
Right? I considered getting my very first tattoo… a wedding band. Between cooking, gardening, and drumming… my rings get in the way.
A very lovely poem, really enjoyed reading
You practice what you preach–I can see how much love you put into your cooking.
ah, yes. this. Perhaps a culinary collection of poems? A recipe book with memoir? The endless dreaming of possibilities, as I prepare to cook dinner tonight, of course! You know me.
I read the poem at the wedding shower! The grooms loved it so much, they want to frame it! Good thing I printed it on nice paper. ha.