Lady of the Lake
On my travels I passed a lonely lake
First light of day washing surroundings grey
Lazy wisps of fog clung to topwater
Where pallid hand reached up breaking surface
I paused peering into aquatic deep
I could not believe what I was seeing
Before me was the Lady of the Lake
Struggling against a fisherman’s line
I looked about and nobody was there
The cries of the water maiden muted
I waded from sacred shore to aid her
Hand retreated at my approach, unsure
Her arm and legs bound ensnaring her fast
Terrified, though, at the sight of my knife
I splayed my free hand to show her goodwill
And then she stilled to watch my slow advance
Moss-like hair suspended around her face
Her beautiful eyes widened in terror
Untrusting she watched my blade dip below
Sliding gently between flesh and the line
I cut it away and all tension broke
Then she suddenly fled away from me
With heavy breath I watched her disappear
Standing there in the quiet of her wake
With heavy heart I made it back to shore
I gathered my things and resumed my walk
And just as I made it around the bend
I spared a glance back to see her out there
Unbound from the unnatural torment
Among the loons and the waterlilies
She did not offer what fairytales say
No kiss nor embrace nor small flattery
She reached down below with eyes judging me
Then she cast something bright into the air
A sword plummeted, impaling the earth
I approached and drew up the mighty steel
In its reflection I spied my future
Invincible I’d become in battle
Any land I sought would be mine to keep
King of kings would even kneel at my feet
My grip tightened at what was yet to be
But with all my might I cast that sword back
Frowning she whispered, “Then what do you want?”
Shaking my head, I only said, “Nothing.”
I left her there to think on my reply
And over the years I trekked far and wide
Everyone said I brought luck to their sails
From time to time I’d look into the deep
Thinking back on the Lady of the Lake
16 thoughts on "Lady of the Lake"
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Oooo I love the turn! The Lady of the Lake’s story is a great one and you brought grace to it.
Thanks, Shauna! I’m happy you enjoyed it.
I thought immediately of Excalibur with the title and dove in with eager delight. And was not disappointed!
Great sensory details: “First light of day washing surroundings grey/Lazy wisps of fog clung to topwater/Where pallid hand reached up breaking surface.
Shewx3: the turn at stanza 11.
Love how you made the tale of the Lady of the Lake yours.
I always loved the Arthurian legends. And I’m happy I didn’t disappoint! Thanks, Pam, as always.
Beautifully written capturing us all.
Thank you for the kind words, Linda.
I love the wording you chose and the descriptive details
Thanks for reading, Olivia!
Wow – great story with twists – Very visual. Easy to get caught up in your tale. Happy Lexpomo!
Thank you for the kind words. Happy Lexpomo as well!
Eric, yoiu’ve crafted a brilliant story/myth here…original and poignant in its language and meaning!
You feedback means a lot. Thank you, Greg!
Wonderful story, Eric!
Thanks for checking it out, John!
This is extremely imaginative, Eric. I was very captivated!
Thanks, Jeremy! It was a fun one to write.