Late Neighbor
I met my neighbor
last night for the first time, late.
He was drunk and chatty.
He excused himself
to spit tobacco.
He said he was scared
of our late neighbor who passed
alone from cancer,
Joe who always joked
about tomatoes,
that he would steal some
from my garden if I would
stop growing weird ones.
Joe wanted just one
tomato a year,
wanted to make one
summer BLT. Summer
wanted to make one
tomato a year.
Joe wanted just one.
Stop growing weird ones
from my garden. If I would,
he would steal that, some.
About tomatoes,
Joe, who always joked
alone, from cancer
passed, who, of our late neighbor,
he said he was scared.
To spit tobacco,
he excused himself.
He was drunk and chatty.
Last night for the first time, late,
I met my neighbor.
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nicely done
I love what you did with this form, and the narrative that emerges is quirky and touching.
LOVE this, really love it! The form is awesome and content wonderful.
Well done on this! Enjoyed reading it.
(Same)
I really enjoyed this.
Palindrome? Nice!
Yep!