Letting Things Grow
should be easy. Can be hard to see
how a tree can be alive. Sure—
in early spring, the limbs look bare
when they contain many universes:
the imperceptible bugs that colony
and caper up and down the bark,
in between the starts of buds.
It takes people weeks to see them bloom
and melt back into their stalwart background.
This one leans the wrong way over KY-1295,
Every September it lets go a crop of vestigial fruit—
tropical green going custard,
two rows of seed big as thumbnails.
Fruits drop where they grew,
macerate onto the asphalt.
A Silverado takes one at fifty,
the scatter turning to liquor in the heat.
Ants and yellow-jackets and all else
brave the road to harvest
like no man will.
I’ve never felt easy to love,
though you could pluck it from me like a fruit.
If I were a tree,
I wouldn’t want you to see me
drop it all
and let it kiss the road.
If you called it anything,
you’d never even have to call it
love.
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Love the personal turn this takes, Shaun. And so matter of factly. No whiffs of desperation. Nice one.
Oh, Shaun = You have the unique ability of taking us on a lovely journey and then punching us in the heart!
I’ve never felt easy to love,
though you could pluck it from me like a fruit.
If I were a tree,
I wouldn’t want you to see me
drop it all
and let it kiss the road.
If you called it anything,
you’d never even have to call it
love. OMG!!!
Shaun, I agree with Sylvia’s take on your poem. Well done.
I agree with all of the previous comments. Shaun, the title leads me into this flowing, relatable poem. Brilliant write
Had me here: “Letting Things Grow/should be easy.
Love: “I’ve never felt easy to love,/though you could pluck it from me like a fruit.
Another brilliant write, Shaun!
Another stunner, Shaun. I love how the little details in this poem complement the big picture message.
Yeah ! Its the details.
You take us on a unique path with details and perspective!
The turn is brilliant in this, Shaun! I absolutely love the details and the images you craft for us.
My favorite line:
“in early spring, the limbs look bare
when they contain many universes:”
So. Good. Yes!
Fantastic extended metaphor.
Wow! I love each line and cannot choose a favorite- they tie together seamlessly. The turn to “I’ve never felt easy to love” to the end of this poem is packed with such deep emotion.
Love that this starts out about pawpaws and then morphs to the cycle of nature and then to the human heart and it’s hesitation to show itself. The third stanza is fantastic and exciting while being violent, almost like a baccanalian stupor, I dunno. Love this Shaun!