Like Tiny Kittens
I pick up some words
with love, like tiny kittens
as they writhe around
I follow their moves
and hug them to settle down
coaxing them to stay
onto a new page
hoping they will start purring
having found a home
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I’ve read a lot of poems that explore wordplay. Most of the time, they’re full of angst and have such an edge to them. This is refreshing. I love this image so much.
Thank you so much for your comments. Much appreciated!
love the sound of purring words
Such lively imagery, and tender. Nicely done!
Ann, being I am born in the YEAR OF THE TIGER ~ I’m purring loudly on this thou first entry! Such a sweet creation. Lovely!
Very nice – love your choice of verbs!
I love this image you end with. I’m going to be thinking about it when I write again
It is so hard to wrangle those words on the page.
just like kittens–!
You succeeded in herding cats, the impossible task. What a wonderful image, words of a poem like kittens.