lonely after eleven
last night i watched the lightning
and the lightning bugs flashing.
i stood out on the back porch
with the air all charged and electric
and stared down the storm
ravaging the next ridge over.
i could feel the static crackling
and connecting.
i chainsmoked two cheap cigarettes
and downed a half a cup
of half cold coffee
that was mostly sugar and cream
and i wiped my sweet mouth
on the back of my hand
and tried hard to recall
how stormy, summer, kisses taste
till the raindrops and the memories
nearly drowned me.
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thanks for reading these, Shaun! I have so enjoyed your work all month long.
Those memories will get you, but sometimes, they are nice to have, aren’t they? Love this poem.
well I suppose I wouldn’t trade the memories! when it comes right down to it, they’re worth writing about anyways huh? thanks so much for reading this and connecting, Philip!
good images, nice turn at the end. You have a distinctive voice. I enjoy your poems
thank you so much, Mike! i’m so glad to see that you’ve enjoyed a few of my poems this year. it’s always so great to connect with new folks here at LexPoMo. feel free to find me over on facebook and keep up with my work! my first ever full length collection of poetry is coming out from Ohio University Press in September and I can’t wait.
Love it!
I saw the lightning bugs and lightning in Gratz Park last night. First time I noticed lightning bugs this year. Maybe take out the last two lines, where it gets preachy. Otherwise quite nice.
my favorite so far. great title.
that makes my day. I agonized over that title.