Many Ways We Talk To Air
For some, the air finds their lips—
where they don’t expect it:
on the porch step,
exhaling day into dark morning,
at the sweaty climax
at the sweaty climax
of sun, when overwhelmed
by some gorgeous landscape vista:
emotion gaining wings.
My grandfather talked to God
and cried each overlong grace
as my grandma looked down
at her cooling food.
Some whisper, some scream
to the dead. Others talk to air at night,
when the room bares
roan and piebald hearts.
In any case, it calls to us—
essence of what makes
essence of what makes
us be.
Without you,
O₂,
our very cells
grow lonely,
pillow-smother with lack.
I’ve had an attack of panic
and the press-and-hush
of my oxygen condensor has filled
its little plastic tube again.
When—when—air answers,
it says little/asks nothing back.
16 thoughts on "Many Ways We Talk To Air"
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I find the first two stanzas particularly lovely. They are so rich with imagery as different examples of breathlessness.
Thank you, Sophie!
God bless you, Shaun.
A lot of threads pulled together here.
Thank you, Kevin. I appreciate your kind words!
This was a pleasant read, Shaun! That second stanza is really pulling some weight. Attacks of panic are the worst. Last line was amazing. Well done!
Thank you, Eric! Poetry orders what can be unorderable.
Title drew me in.
Love “For some, the air finds their lips—/where they don’t expect it:/on the porch step,”
That second stanza, especially “Others talk to air at night,
when the room bares/roan and piebald hearts.”
Thank you so much Pam!!
Oh, Shaun! I could read your poems forever and always see something new! In love with “roan and piebald hearts.” and “pillow-smother with lack.”
Thank you for your close reading and kindness!
what words. super dangerous roan and piebald hearts!
Another tender, vulnerable, haunting poem that takes my breath away.
In love with:
“Others talk to air at night,
when the room bares
roan and piebald hearts.”
&
“Without you,
O₂,
our very cells
grow lonely,
pillow-smother with lack.”
Wow! So much emotion– and how you transform “air” from a silent listener into a literal, medical necessity that sustains life– is fantastic! Amazing title, too.
This is spectacular. The way you make visible and tangible the literal invisible and intangible air is awe-inspiring!
What a powerful poem, Shawn! The line that really “talks” to me is,:
“Others talk to air at night,
when the room bares
roan and piebald hearts.”
If I can make one minor suggestion: Make this a two-part poem with the break after:
“In any case, it calls to us—
essence of what makes
us be.”
That is such a strong stanza, and I think a break there would give it even more impact.