maxim
Feed me a slug
and I’ll mutter,
depending on
what the dew point
dares to dredge from
fallowed miasma and
hangdog dogwood blossoms,
some scrubbed box-top shibboleth,
tickling, life was hard and people
surprise you, hangnail plastic
burs disturbing a blistered
stencil’s bored out breast
plate pressed to the
shipwrecked sun—see,
all of it crimped in an i or an r
as the iron inters some scar
or impartible clue in the ox-
ford shirt’s scrunched cuffs
or the dandering hackles that
dandle the screw-stripped neck
to deflect, and redundant as
floundering rounds of a
frowning or yowling clown ruff,
frisson, cathexis, wobbling
novelty—see,
where the stars still barb all the
eigengrau baleen sweeping
eternity clean, where the
mold means less than
death’s suggestion:
sunlight licking some slug trail lean
as eternity, shy as a limelight, summons this
scattershot caterwaul aura up sulking sills
and the seam-ripped bluebells beckoning
everything back, as the knock-
kneed whale wraps rapturous,
season-slow song along throttling
furlongs, throngs of foam-
fraught, seamless sea
suspended in
bristling
music—
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Some very nice imagery. I love this:
hangdog dogwood blossoms,
nice repetition of “dog.” There’s a name for that in the Poetry Dictionary, but it escapes me at the moment. LoL
Great repetition of the “B” sound, and I really like the way you separated “breast” and “plate,” getting dual use out of “breast.” Nicely done!
But I wonder, is there more than one poem here? Or should segments be numbered with Roman numerals? Just a thought.