Midnight Service
Last night a hoot owl sat outside my window
Planted himself dead center in the branches of the dying oak
Said he was there to pave the way for the preacher
My grandfather, the preacher, dearly departed
A tiny man bursting at the seams with fire and brimstone
Three piece suit, tie, hat, wrist watch, a daily lifetime ritual
Grandfather Jett, not grandpa, pawpaw or grandpap
Referred to as ‘Brother’ or ‘Preacher’ by most
My grandmother, lovingly called ‘Sister Jett’,
My father attended church eight times a week
Till, at 15, he graduated and caught a bus up north
Had enough of invocations, scriptures, benedictions
Grandfather quietly arrived at the foot of my bed
Grandmother stepped in the room shortly after
They held hands decked out in their Sunday best
He quoted a couple bible verses, sang a bit
She reminded me to stay on a righteous path
Then they took flight beside that old hoot owl
My dad never showed
Guess he elected to sit that sermon out too.
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Such a great memory. We are all better off when we have a person just like your grandfather in our memory or better still on our front porch. So glad he still visits.
Wendy – So many wonderful images – My favorite “A tiny man bursting at the seams with fire and brimstone.” So expressive. Love the difference between men. Great end.
You have such a way with words!
Beautiful description, powerful images, very alive
Thanks for the input everyone!
A dapper gentleman it sounds, and two of the wiser owls disappeared into the long night, no doubt.
Lovely way of storytelling, here, with the intro and the snarky but powerfully subtle extro. The characterization was clear, even in so few words.
I love this fairytale-like visitation from the owl.
Both father and grandfather vividly painted.
Love the detailed description of your grandfather, so full of respect. The ethereal hoot owl as herald and guide. The ever so subtle chastising of your dad. Vivid images that capture the reader!
Strong images in this narrative poem.