Mildew
Between turbulent rains
there is time enough to gather
our belongings and air
them on (the) line.
Not for long because
yet more clouds gather,
like the neighbor children,
come to gawk at our
thin garments.
They shower jeers
they don’t yet
understand,
terse judgements
they have only
heard after prayers,
around supper tables,
spotless and bland.
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The title tells us
that mold is involved
how kids are molded
into what they believe
…nice work
✨✨✨ really enjoyed this, the second stanza is wonderful
Oh, the irony! How the children learn their judgments after prayer…
I love “neighbor children/come to gawk/at our thin garments.” Clever poem!
It’s raining from the sky and from the mouths of children. Nice doubling up.
well put, the weakness of judgments