Mimosa Pudica
The sensitive plant is a houseguest—
but it thrives, during summer, outdoors.
It likes direct sun (not too hot)—
it loves dampened soil (not too wet)—
it craves breath of space (not too much)—
any of these, in excess, can kill
those leaves that fold up,
those stems that roll up,
when touched without care
for their kind.
More often than not, it’s tossed out
when the season has come to an end,
an annual whose beauty’s adored
til it’s not, til that beauty has waned.
But those who do care will not plant
these kids in the heat,
nor drown their sweet feet,
nor assume that this poem
is about flowers.
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i LOVE this.
i have been both the plant and the gardener in this poem.
just know that there is a plant out there that is incredibly hardy, easy to grow/care for, and actually sparkles in the sun.
literally and figuratively.
? ty, ma’am. I guess it can be read that way too ?
not necessarily as a romantic kind of thing.
just…it’s a thing.
too much rosé-words are hard right now. ?
Feel that.
Thank you, again ?
yep
clever poem and well-done
Ty, Mike!
Dig it
Look at you, replying cleverly ?
Thank you, Renee!
I get it…and it is not about plants! Well worded!
Ty, mom ?
For your reply, and the phone calls.
Nice qualifiers. Great turn.
Thank you, Sylvia!