Monostitch Latch #2
Strange how much grit it takes
to hold your tongue.
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Strange how much grit it takes
to hold your tongue.
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Another fantastic set, and in only ten syllables. I like how each word is monosyllabic. I like the play on grit. I like the fact that the texture of the words makes me feel it under my tongue and teeth. What’s more, immensely maximic and quotable. Beyond a great job, again.
As always, your encouragement and praise are both luminous and voluminous! Thank you. I almost didn’t submit this one.
Seeing this, I’m glad that you went ahead and put it out there! I always enjoy how punchy and “that’s going to stick with me” these small poems can be!
Very well said!