Morning
Morning
First reading,
not poetry,
not crafting,
not the art of writing,
what happens to my day?
My mind gropes for something to say.
My feelings start writing
over my thoughts like rafting
the Cumberland River where poetry
becomes an oak, so tall, needing
an eagle’s rough nest to comple it,
nothing more,
nothing less,
no art except
the water flowing
past.
6 thoughts on "Morning"
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I actually adore the metaphors in this one!
Thanks so much, Joseph, for liking the metaphors.
Your poems take me out of the city into nature, and I love them for that!
Thanks, Sylvia, nature is a part of me… I am happy no one points out the incomplete word (comple), for readers know what it takes to complete this tree…
Cumberland River was enough to snare this reader. Grew up along the headwater and it ran itself to the middle of me.
Loved the poem and all it allusions.
K. Bruce, I grew up toward the lower end of Lake Cumberland, but have fished along the headwaters that you know.