Mourning
Really, I don’t want
to write about
this dark. I crave light,
to see the moon
face in daytime,
some sun to fracture
another ragged day. Long
after midnight
I remembered to fill
the feeder. My porch
is a watchtower
of cold and stars.
At daylight a housefinch,
a redbird, a titmouse
were in line for breakfast,
taking turns, charitable
as the clouds soon
binding the morning sky.
5 thoughts on "Mourning"
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I especially love the first verse. Too, we can take a lesson from Mother Nature! Well done.
So special
Gorgeous, Marianne!
Lovely, Marianne. I am especially drawn to the image created in the 2nd-3rd stanzas and the word choice in the closing lines. Brava!
The relationship between morning and the title works unspoken in the piece. I love “I crave light,” “My porch/is a watchtower…”