Mr. Rochelle
I was in the second grade.
It was a weekend.
I walked across a vacant field
that stood between our house
and the house where
Mr. and Mrs. Rochelle lived.
They were older than my grandparents.
Maybe they were retired
but I never saw them not working.
Sometimes they included me in their work.
They were my friends.
On that day I could see Mr. Rochelle
in the apple orchard behind his house.
I kept my unwavering eyes on him
the whole time I walked across the field
dragging and lifting my feet
through the tall grasses.
Once there,
I looked up and called out his name
He was near the top of
his very tall ladder
standing like a God
with his head lost in a cloud of leaves.
He heard me call and glanced my way
Upon seeing me he tugged down the already wilted bandana
from around his neck, which slid off easily
and fast mopped his face from brow to chin
before smiling broadly to greet me.
We were both overcome with joy
So happy to see one another
Caught in a glow greater than the sun
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What a happy memory you captured so well
Thanks for reading this—It was a happy memory– I feel lucky to have it…from another era in the 1950’s. There is now a shopping center where our houses once stood. I very much appreciate your comment!
Oh! I love the last lines! Wonderful, very visual piece!
Thank you for commenting so much!The last lines just came and I never wanted to change them. It was just like that.
You really draw us into this moment so clearly! I loved “dragging and lifting my feet/through the tall grasses.” It made me have a very sensory memory of a moment too.
Many thanks for your comments. So glad it triggered a memory for you. I love these memories that give us definitions and feelings about our life experiences. who knew which ones would last so long? Which ones mattered…
Many thanks for your comments. So glad it triggered a memory for you. I love these memories that give us definitions and feelings about our life experiences. who knew which ones would last so long? Which ones mattered…
Ann, I love the vivid tenderness of this encounter. It grounds me so in how simple, yet how ‘real’ it used to be when we took the time to ‘be’ with each other. Time slows for me in this piece, I love the movie, thank you so much very heart warming.