I Could Have Made this Up, But I Didn’t Have To
While staring out my window
On my still, suburban street
I saw a hawk a rabbit catch
And rabbit he did eat.
The fur he shook from off himself,
And turned to see me there
I made no move but flew he still
Away into the air.
What world is this, I said aloud
No justice will be found
Until the hawk an eagle meets
Who shakes him all around.
No malice meant, I understood,
The feathers and the fur
Would meet again, Solomon knows,
The world is as it were.
As I gazed down at the roadway,
Quite unsettled in my skin,
The fur no longer fur it seemed –
I had to know right then.
And so I, in a nightgown clad,
Slipped out into the street
To settle once, for all, the question
What did that hawk eat?
No fur I saw but feathers, yes
The rabbit still lives on
But the kinsman of the hawk, I fear,
(A pigeon) now is gone.
No lesson, though, no moral
Have I come here to provide
Just the strong perhaps I always hold:
It’s best to stay inside.
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So much fun to read. Your consistent rhythm sweeps us along in your tale. The running metaphor so strong, the humor clear, definite and the lesson well taught. Thank you.
the placement of words struck me Jane. I agree with KBF it was a joy to read, from beginning to end.
(I stay inside)
Thank you K. Bruce – it was a bizarre experience but fun to write.
Thank you manny_jg (me too)
Clever and well done
wonderful! thanks for sharing.
So much fun to read!
Thanks you all!
So great! A quick moving poem! Great story, great word choice, great sound! Thanks for this!
Thanks Venicia!
Truth makes circumstance and the poem is truer than fiction…