My Friend the Colorblind Photographer Looks at the World
The goldfinch is just a shape in the fig tree,
a density among the leaves, which I know
by their shape, & the fig-shaped figs
that the goldfinch is eyeing,
wondering, like me, when
they’ll be ripe.
The cardinal in the gingko, calling for a mate—
I know him not by his famous bright color
but by his spiky punk haircut,
his bandit’s mask
& his song.
It’s all black & white cinema, whites & grays
floating in a lake of Rembrandt dark.
It’s what I’ve have to work with,
what I’ve been given to make
the most of.
The profile of low-lying clouds lit from below at sunset,
the outlines of waves as they crash on a beach,
your eye like a black plum
in a bowl of cream.
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Love this…”the goldfinch is just a shape in a fig tree”…the “spiky punk haircut” on the cardinal. The ending really punches and might be my favorite part. “your eye like a black plum/ in a bowl of cream.”
The poem itself is a little like a wave that’s lapping, lapping, lapping to shore with the observations. Very satisfying read.
i loved the whole poem- but those last two lines are epic..
This whole thing.
Every stanza.
Every image
Every ending
Every voice
Every you.
Bravo!!!
“It’s what I’ve have to work with,
what I’ve been given to make
the most of.”
Is such a marvelous moment in this perfect poem.
love this, especially the shape of each stanza, like the way the scene narrows as the camera moves in.
You’re able to see that way, in black and white. It really is a different way of seeing, and the poem conveys it well.
This is a gorgeous piece–that ending is just a stunning image