mystic or child
in the not hearing
Wind or Waze
in the not seeing
cloud or snowcapped
mountain in the not
knowing a ride
on the pelican’s back
or following its shadow
on the sand embracing
the old woman
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So sparse and completely intriguing. Great title.
Last couple it should read
on the sand embracing
the old woman
sends me off in alotta directions.
Yes, intriguing! Thanks.
Very nice. I love the minimalist language and how it brings out the mystery.
Precise and poignant.
Love how your line breaks and no punctuation result in many different meanings. Intriguing!