mystic or child
in the not hearing
Wind or Waze
in the not seeing
cloud or snowcapped
mountain in the not
knowing a ride
on the pelican’s back
or following its shadow
on the sand embracing
the old woman
in the not hearing
Wind or Waze
in the not seeing
cloud or snowcapped
mountain in the not
knowing a ride
on the pelican’s back
or following its shadow
on the sand embracing
the old woman
So sparse and completely intriguing. Great title.
Last couple it should read
on the sand embracing
the old woman
sends me off in alotta directions.
Yes, intriguing! Thanks.
Very nice. I love the minimalist language and how it brings out the mystery.
Precise and poignant.
Love how your line breaks and no punctuation result in many different meanings. Intriguing!