NEWER POSTS >
when we were falling,
your notes were filled
with longing and
declarations
later, they showcased
your humor and
reinforced your commitment
over time, they became
less frequent, less verbose,
less personal:
don’t forget the toilet paper
what time is dinner?
did you feed the dog?
and then, this morning:
do you still love me?
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This is interesting, because even just seeing one side of the story we can clearly tell both sides are having issues. Also, I adore your first stanza.
Thank you so much, L.!
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Indeed. Thank you, Joseph!
oh wow. that packs a punch in such brevity.
Thank you, Quackstar!
love the title, line breaks, direct quotes of this narrative in a nutshell
Thank you, Gaby!
Wow! Captures the process of a relationship very well.
Thank you, Greg!
The movement here is so effective and well-rendered.
Thank you, Shaun!