Old Men
Old men,
with scars on their fingertips
backs bent
fingers knotted
like an old tree growing up around power lines-
but they won’t admit it hurts.
Old men,
who won’t carry glasses,
but won’t have the menu read to them.
I see one right now;
wearing his spouse’s blue-flowered-rhinestone-studded frames
and hiding behind a menu from a waiter
who could’ve been him some years ago
Old man,
when I ask for a story he looks down at his hands
and talks about how he played on train tracks
and set a tire ablaze before rolling it down first street.
I see the childish glee return to his face,
then a wince at the irresponsibility,
then remorse cloud his eyes
as if he still wishes he were young
(and stupid)
enough to roll a flaming tire into traffic.
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it is never too late to burn shit up… this is an enjoyable read!
Well done. I like the repetition of One men/Old men/Old man.
This is the first poem that I read today. And I love it very much.
Well done. You’ve taken a personal observation and made it universally recognizable.
I love how compassionate this poem is.
I’m so glad to see you getting all this well-deserved praise. Great poem, Regan.
Old Men is a poem that shows your seeing, listening, feeling modes–great attributes for a poetess.
like an old tree growing up around power lines-
DANG
I love this so much. Beautiful imagery and I can relate to that touch of sadness.
Beautiful images here. Very nice!