On High Street, 2007
We’ve square-danced in a school gym
and we’ve prayed to quell our appetites.
and we’ve prayed to quell our appetites.
We know the county’s every road
that doesn’t have a name to it,
that doesn’t have a name to it,
the Sonic where the carhops doze,
the field we take a flame to it.
the field we take a flame to it.
We’ve workshopped in a library,
read our worst stuff to the room,
read our worst stuff to the room,
sold art at the local fair
from a friend’s crusty booth,
from a friend’s crusty booth,
passed the peace three counties
into a group that saved a seat for us;
into a group that saved a seat for us;
watched the preacher’s son
learn the back booth of a Waffle House,
learn the back booth of a Waffle House,
made a disco of a barn,
a ballroom of a cattle chute,
a ballroom of a cattle chute,
danced till the grid was empty
at the dial tone of a dawn—
at the dial tone of a dawn—
the times we fell too hard.
Times passed out on the kitchen floor
making beds of Goodwill,
heirloom, and dollar store quilts:
crazy colors stitched together,
all of us surrounding us.
crazy colors stitched together,
all of us surrounding us.
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I love the scrapiness the eminates from these lines, a pure, gritty, we’re-gonna-make-it-no-matter-what spirit. Together. Thanks for sharing!
I love how this builds. This poem is both a snapshot and an entire history all at once. Exquisite poem!
Wonderful! I especially like the line “the dial tone of a dawn”! And the clever way you inadvertently juxtapose “quilts:” and “crazy” and the how that automatically brought me to the historical act of making practical/heirloom crazy quilts. Bravo to the whole vibe of this poem!
Shaun this is really funny !!!
Listening to Patti Griffin right now,
Change, and your poem locked in even in the drops ……lol…that was awesome. So many things, loked in at no name roads and stayed
“watched the preacher’s son
learn the back booth of a Waffle House,” had a beer spilling incident. And the whole dang thing.
“crazy colors stitched together,
all of us surrounding us.”
I highly recommend pulling up that song and running through town a couple times 😀
Absolutely 💯
I appreciate the variety of tones in your poems to date. I love the comfort conveyed by the final image/last line
This reads like youth’s nostalgic chaos- active, unpredictable, sweet in retrospect. Great work!
Agree with Gaby! Love the different tones and places you take us.
Love, love this timeline of connection and history.
So many lines to love for their incredible images and emotions, a few favs: “passed the peace three counties/into a group that saved a seat for us;/watched the preacher’s son/learn the back booth of a Waffle House”
and May it be so for all of us: “crazy colors stitched together,
all of us surrounding us.”
Wonderful to read you again Shaun. This is a romp through time and town.
Such varied activity and detail in this remembering of another time and place. And the last stanza is a perfect coda.
So much energy in this piece Shaun!
Love the places you take us in this poem, all its motion, and then how it ends in:
passed out on the kitchen floor
making beds of Goodwill,
heirloom, and dollar store quilts:
crazy colors stitched together,
all of us surrounding us.
“danced till the grid was empty
at the dial tone of a dawn—”
is my favorite out of all the great language here!
Shaun, i feel the family in community the familiarity in places that have posed as permanent scenery amidst souls’ at play and pray! Thank you