On High Street, 2007
We’ve square-danced in a school gym
and we’ve prayed to quell our appetites.
and we’ve prayed to quell our appetites.
We know the county’s every road
that doesn’t have a name to it,
that doesn’t have a name to it,
the Sonic where the carhops doze,
the field we take a flame to it.
the field we take a flame to it.
We’ve workshopped in a library,
read our worst stuff to the room,
read our worst stuff to the room,
sold art at the local fair
from a friend’s crusty booth,
from a friend’s crusty booth,
passed the peace three counties
into a group that saved a seat for us;
into a group that saved a seat for us;
watched the preacher’s son
learn the back booth of a Waffle House,
learn the back booth of a Waffle House,
made a disco of a barn,
a ballroom of a cattle chute,
a ballroom of a cattle chute,
danced till the grid was empty
at the dial tone of a dawn—
at the dial tone of a dawn—
the times we fell too hard.
Times passed out on the kitchen floor
making beds of Goodwill,
heirloom, and dollar store quilts:
crazy colors stitched together,
all of us surrounding us.
crazy colors stitched together,
all of us surrounding us.
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I love the scrapiness the eminates from these lines, a pure, gritty, we’re-gonna-make-it-no-matter-what spirit. Together. Thanks for sharing!
I love how this builds. This poem is both a snapshot and an entire history all at once. Exquisite poem!
Thank you HA!
Thank you, Eric! I was trying to relive my youth a little bit!
Wonderful! I especially like the line “the dial tone of a dawn”! And the clever way you inadvertently juxtapose “quilts:” and “crazy” and the how that automatically brought me to the historical act of making practical/heirloom crazy quilts. Bravo to the whole vibe of this poem!
Thank you, Winter Dawn! We love a crazy quilt in this house for sure.
Shaun this is really funny !!!
Listening to Patti Griffin right now,
Change, and your poem locked in even in the drops ……lol…that was awesome. So many things, loked in at no name roads and stayed
“watched the preacher’s son
learn the back booth of a Waffle House,” had a beer spilling incident. And the whole dang thing.
“crazy colors stitched together,
all of us surrounding us.”
I highly recommend pulling up that song and running through town a couple times 😀
Absolutely 💯
I had to listen to it a couple times since you commented! Thanks, Coleman! I dig the vibes.
I appreciate the variety of tones in your poems to date. I love the comfort conveyed by the final image/last line
Thank you, Gaby! I’ve been pushing myself to try new things.
This reads like youth’s nostalgic chaos- active, unpredictable, sweet in retrospect. Great work!
Austen, thank you. Shew youth is all of those things to me.
Agree with Gaby! Love the different tones and places you take us.
Thank you so much, Linda!
Love, love this timeline of connection and history.
So many lines to love for their incredible images and emotions, a few favs: “passed the peace three counties/into a group that saved a seat for us;/watched the preacher’s son/learn the back booth of a Waffle House”
and May it be so for all of us: “crazy colors stitched together,
all of us surrounding us.”
Thank you, Pam! I think we at LexPoMo have our own kind of crazy quilt here!
Wonderful to read you again Shaun. This is a romp through time and town.
Thank you Bill! I’d romp to this day if I still had the serotonin
Such varied activity and detail in this remembering of another time and place. And the last stanza is a perfect coda.
Thank you so much, Mary.
So much energy in this piece Shaun!
Thank you Jeremy!
Love the places you take us in this poem, all its motion, and then how it ends in:
passed out on the kitchen floor
making beds of Goodwill,
heirloom, and dollar store quilts:
crazy colors stitched together,
all of us surrounding us.
Thank you, Karen!
“danced till the grid was empty
at the dial tone of a dawn—”
is my favorite out of all the great language here!
Thank you so much, Greg!
Shaun, i feel the family in community the familiarity in places that have posed as permanent scenery amidst souls’ at play and pray! Thank you
Thank you Darlene! Chosen family is special too!
fantastic rhythm and sound! There’s so much reality married with affection in this poem. It feels like HOME!
Thank you, Ellen! It certainly was a home for a time!