On second thought,
I like how messy these pictures cut crooked, brown tape holding in place on gray paper— the inside of frame turned around, edges of photos slanted carelessly cut hung imbalanced to each other in defiance of your neverending misuse of grammar. they are not hung perfect.
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Neat! Did you originally have line breaks? Mine always come out this way.
I did, but I liked how this format worked… it lead me to write the last line. Then, I copy/pasted this formatting back to my word document to decide for final edit. The process of transferring poems from word to this site does give you a chance to play with form. Perhaps I’ll post the original with line breaks and you can compare and tell me which you like better?
That would be great!
that’s for sure
they are not hung perfect. !!!