One Day The Hungry Dogs Will Come to Eat the Rich
“Let me tell you something. There’s no nobility in poverty.”
-Jordan Belfort, The Wolf of Wall Street
Rarely do we ask to hear the overdog story.
We revel in the details of a hard-fought, hard-won battle
An honest climb from humble beginnings to stratospheric heights
We ask for your tired, poor, huddled masses
as we suffocate in this polluted air,
yearning to b(r)e[athe] free
in bodies breaking under the weight of an old colossus
we celebrate victories along a sliding scale of impossibilities,
seek stories of suffering
relish retellings of feats of echoing endurance
on occasion, we call to mind quiet champions,
but we prefer to savor the spit of our own watering mouths aching to taste tales of violent overthrowing
I pass a man sitting on the sidewalk along Sixth Avenue
he held a sign that read “underdawg”
most walk past him
several pass through him like an apparition they can’t bother to fear
I reached into my pocket
found some loose change
dropped it in his hat, mouthed a quick “me, too”
& walked on without breaking stride
Ten blocks later I asked myself
Who among us become the overdogs?
I look south towards Wall Street
and remember those forbidden fables not meant for our tick-ridden ears
so, we howl at the moon
bark, bite
run wild in packs
lie in wait under skyscraped shadows
we keep the overdogs wondering
if we’ll ever stop chasing our tails long enough
to hunt them down
tear them to shreads
and feast on our fortune reclaimed
tear them to shreads
and feast on our fortune reclaimed
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never in my life had I thought of an overdog, but it only stands to reason, like night and day. I especially feel this:
yearning to b(r)e[athe] free
I hadn’t considered it in a while. The stanza about passing the man on the street is true. I literally thought, in far less eloquent terms, “Who the f*ck become the overdogs?” Thank you for reading. I’m glad this poem spoke to you.
I related to those last two stanzas, especially our “chasing our tails” while relishing the overdog story
Glad you did, Gaby. This idea has been kicking around for quite some time. So happy you read it and related to those last two stanzas.
This poem is either a warning or a promise. (Up to the reader.) A great work laced creative use of wording and punctuation. Great job. Coming after you, manipulative billionaires!
It certainly feels like one or the other (depending on the day). Thank you so much for your generous comments and for taking the time to read with care. Yes, billionaires beware!
You penned a work of art.
Thank you, John. Let’s see if life will imitate art for this one. (Yikes!)
Had me here and I entered the poem differently because of it.:” Rarely do we ask to hear the overdog story.”
Love the rhthym and sounds: “forbidden fables not meant for our tick-ridden ears”
Yesssss: “if we’ll ever stop chasing our tails long enough”
Thank you, Pam. Yeah, I left the opening as such on purpose. I figured it would cause some folks take pause (myself included!). Always appreciate your thoughtful reading.
“if we’ll ever stop chasing our tails long enough
to hunt them down
tear them to shreads
and feast on our fortune reclaimed”
… one can hope. : )
Meant to add love “bodies breaking under the weight of an old colossus”
Thank you, Bill! Glad you like these moments in the poem.
A painting on streets in every city, intersections in rural America. There is a sadness in this poem and yet a hope. Your use of language pulls us in immediately. Visual intensity.
Absolutely! Urban and rural spaces have a lot more in common than meets the eye. I’m so glad you mentioned this in you comment. Thank you for also recognizing the element of hope amidst the despair. Thank you for reading.
The self-sabotage of infighting vs. focusing anger into action- very timely!
Thank you, Austen!
Love the howl and bite coming from you, H.A.!!
“several pass through him like an apparition they can’t bother to fear” – awesome
Thank you, Sylvia! I am glad that you like this one. 💜