Parallel Thirds
When
June
begins
like a song
I have always known,
I slide beside in harmony.
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When
June
begins
like a song
I have always known,
I slide beside in harmony.
You must be logged in to post a comment.
I can almost hear you sing this poem. I wish I really could, you bewitching chanteuse.
I feel this poem so much! Perfectly capturing the LexPoMo vibe.
You capture so much feeling in this poem. Simple on the surface, but with hidden depths.
A fib! Well done.
Thanks! I keep trying them. 🙂
A perfect little poem. I love the last line!
Beautiful!
Sounds like a start to a beautiful song!!
Perfect! (Oh, no – that would be a fourth or fifth, not a third 😉
You joke at intervals! 🙂
Lovely!
Perfectly in tune! Await encores!
Well done! You turned me onto this form, too!
Wonderful poem! Full of song!