People in Cars, The Sequel
Vintage brown four-door Mercedes
probably from the 70s
surfer dude in bare feet
Have you seen him ride his board?
beached on this city street
taking a nap in the backseat
legs lean out the side window
ghostly feet under white blanket
switches to front seat
lights up, big smoke comes out the sunroof
starts it up, drives off in a puff
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So visual and vivid in your well selected words..I love the way you bring it to a close with those last two lines “lights up, big smoke comes out the sunroof
starts it up, drives off in a puff”…..making me see the car and driver one in the same. A great portrait of a moment in time!