Photo Analysis III
Open where light is reflected:
In the cherry wood of the bar, dark velvet fabric
elbows leaning, dirty oyster countertop
echoing hanging and caged bulbs;
he is looking away
toward the bathrooms where she’s gone, bald spot
revealed to rows of onlooking glasses
awaiting filling, bottles
awaiting emptying,
all the while not seeing
the unseen
photographer holding his phone–
waiting–because she is
supposed to
photograph the pair
when she
returns.
He is looking away, in full suit,
one foot flat, supporting, one foot behind, on a toe,
ready to move.
She is, of course, out of view,
outside the frame.
The outside observer snaps the photo;
doesn’t tell him. Or her. Then. Or ever. He will find it
later, while scrolling to find it—himself/her/them—again,
after he’s dropped her home for the night, drinking
the coffee she’d made him in secret, made him wait for,
tiptoeing through a house, then back across pavement,
barefoot in the cold, soles blackened,
her head on his shoulders–
embracing him in the driveway–
embracing them in the night
before leaving,
and he’s driving
the hour and a half
home.
But for now,
he is looking away
from the shutter
as it snaps,
spins,
snaps,
and captures
a man waiting
for what he knows
will return, what he knows is
coming
before leaving
or having to
leave
or being
what is left
(end scene)
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I like the layer of mystery and intrigue added from the subject not being aware of the photographer. You really capture the beauty and complexity of single moments in time here, thanks for sharing!
Thank you, man.
Yea, you can’t buy moments like seeing it on the phone
Yes I also like the relationship between the outside observer and the subject. That ending just nails it.
Thank you, Bill
I think I love the first line most of all- being open and light being able to reflect are kind of a chicken and egg sitch…
💙🙏🏻
embracing him in the driveway–
embracing them in the night
before leaving,
This feeling of the watcher watching carries so well through the poem and the picture you have painted so clearly more than a photo could tell
Ty, Arwen.
One of those moments I’ll still see too well for a long while 😞