Pins and Needles
third week in new apartment
third month at new job
thirty-ninth week pregnant
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third week in new apartment
third month at new job
thirty-ninth week pregnant
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I love the way you play with the number 3! Such incredible iterations packed into three tiny lines. Yes!!! I cannot wait to read more of your work this June, Gaby!
Economical and effective as always, Gaby.
great capture of that ever present sitting on pins and needles moment
Hi Gabby, love the threes as well and the pins and…….thirty-nine weeks !!! Yes pins…..as always love the interplay of the photo and poem….haiga master ❤️
A life in flux! I love how this poem captures a moment of intense transition and barely-contained anticipation. You always pick the perfect photos.
You have a wonderfully fluid and offbeat mind, Gaby!
Wow
last line made me
………………..pause
transported Gaby
Creative work here, as always. Good to see you again.
What if you added some wordplay to the title and called it “Diaper Pins and Needles”?
Very nice, Gaby. The waiting is the hardest part.
Well done concise metaphor!
Love the metaphor! Makes me want to know more! Fantastic!
Love this and feel this
Love the raw edges to this list poem
Love the play with numbers, and always love your pairing with pictures.
Yikes—things happen in 3’s —love the old time pin cushion! Remember the ones that looked like tomatoes?!