Pisces Sun
zodiac elder,
neptune’s daughter
guided by forces even she doesn’t know
affection junkie trailing sea foam kisses
from salt-cracked lips
caught in the cosmic in-between
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YES!! This is my favorite so far.
I love the images. You root us in our cosmic origin (I’m Pisces Sun, too) in the first stanza.
“affection junkie” is so clever. It could be the name of a poetry collection for recovering Pisces.
“Sea foam” and “salt-cracked” have such a good sound and visual.
I am quite fond of “affection junkie”! So glad you enjoyed this mini series of astrological inspired work as much as I’ve enjoyed writing it
Well, I’ve been caught in the “cosmic in-between” and it’s no picnic! Enjoying your series as well. You and Tabitha should join forces.
It sure is one hell of a place isn’t it. Thank you for all the kind words!
Love: “affection junkie trailing sea foam kisses
from salt-cracked lips”
Thank you so much!
I am such a non-zodiac elder learning a lot of zodiac directives through your poems.
Oh wow! I’m glad to hear you’ve discovered something new