Pitter Patter
It’s been raining all day,
not the vengeful deluge that soaks your socks until they squish with each step,
but the gentle kind of rain
that kisses your collarbone
and sprinkles sparkling droplets in your tangled locks.
It’s been raining all day,
drops pitter pattering on window panes,
plashing wind chimes, their jingling tinkle brightening the sunless afternoon.
It’s the lulling kind of rain
that sings you to sleep
and whispers sweet nothings into your ear as you doze drooling on the sofa
because it’s been raining all day,
and you have nothing better to do than listen to the shushing
shower that hushes your hurried thoughts and bids you bask in nature’s quietude.
It’s the joyful kind of rain
that urges you to indulge in childhood folly. On days like these, you can skip from puddle
to parking lot puddle and remember how you never used to care about soggy shoes.
It’s been raining all day,
but it’s the most beautiful kind of rain, and I hope it comes back to visit soon.
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I was in a funk all day yesterday. The rain only made it worse.
Thank you for reminding us of how we saw it when we were young and it was magic.
I understand that. Usually I’m not a fan of rain, but it was so soothing yesterday that I knew I had to write about it. Thank you!
You captured everything I love about the rain!
“As you doze drooling on the sofa” made me laugh with recognition.
Thank you! I’m happy this poem was able to connect with you, and I’m glad I’m not alone in that embarrassing habit. 🤣
This is so lovely – the sounds and the descriptions.
Thank you! I wanted the poem to sound as calming as the rain.
I want to live in the rainy day of this poem.
It was such a lovely day!😌
I like the line breaks here, how they ebb and flow like rain, as well as the repetition. Honestly, this felt like a peaceful diary entry and tribute all at once. Nicely done.
Thank you! I thought the rain imagery would fit well in villanelle form.