Poetry at the Motel
I tried to drive slow enough
so that Poetry could keep up,
but it seems I sped right past
the fog hanging in the valley
and the butterfly flexing its
wings atop the fresh roadkill.
I suppose Poetry found an old
roadside motel for the night,
one whose diner serves coffee
that steams just right and leaves
a perfect stain on the napkin
scribbled with notes on how
the cook wields his spatula.
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I love how you continued Poetry’s story in this poem, and the image of a butterfly alighting on decaying roadkill is superb!
There was so much roadkill on the way down here! 🙁
I like the thought that we are ahead of our creations, that poetry follows us. It emphasizes our agency.
I’m glad you liked it! Thanks
Hi, Kris! And yet, you didn’t speed past at all…
Hi, Ellen! Thanks for reading my poem 🙂
I’m looking forward to this journey, Kris.
It’s a good journey so far! Thanks for your comment
Ha! I love it.
🙂
I have to know if you actually saw the butterfly on the roadkill, or if you came up with that on your own.
I’ll never tell! lol
The butterfly imagery is wonderful! They’re usually described as delicate, so the “flexing/ its wings” atop roadkill was a refreshing new take. And the closing line of the cook “wield[ing]” his spatula made me smile. I’ve said it before, but you have a knack for drawing out the beauty of mundane situations through you poetry. 🙂
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