Red Rover
I try to push through.
Your body catches my clothing
and the skin.
I do not know
whether this is the end,
or whether it ended before it began,
red rover.
Caught in your bony, stark limbs,
suddenly comes my sentence;
I’m so happy to lose.
I do not know
if this is a kiss,
or a bruise,
red rover.
Red rover,
with you
I wonder at who I am;
I change with everyone.
It is like dishonesty,
but tonight I swear
I’m doing alright.
I would have only held you
if that was your way,
or your religion.
I would have held you:
tight, bony, and stark,
a couple of bookends
holding racy magazines.
Red rover,
red rover,
you trembled,
and shook the mountains
like the good lord
calling us
away.
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Last stanza could stand alone as a poem.
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I really like the penultimate verse the best I think. The poem is set up well. Wait, I like the second verse too. I feel like the poem wants to be a little longer. You’ve caught a tiger by the tail.
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I like the thought of busting through or past someone, or trying (like in the game). The last stanza is my favorite too. It has a combined feeling of gratitude and morbidity which I appreciate.
morbid? Arwen!
Agree on the last stanza.
Also love the
“I do not know
if this is a kiss,
or a bruise”
like a gut punch good. I also love “I do not know if this is a kiss, or a bruise.”
that’s my favorite verse
“a couple of bookends
holding racy magazines”
Manny, you never fail to amaze!
dawwwwww
The rhyme in the second stanza makes it stand out. My favorite.
mine too