Redwood Spring
This terraced forest
where moisture still
rises to the surface.
A saturation of cattails
and doe tracks
near a trail on the hill
above our home.
The rusty iron pipe pours
a noisy liquid silver strand
onto some slickened bricks,
while a single thick
porcelain mug hangs
on a hook above the loose
stacked stones.
Cold water in the mug
is a small dance, bubbles
clinging to old glaze.
They surface then pop
into being thin air,
soon gone.
In this smooth bowl
with my own two hands
I carry water to the Dawn
Redwood below the spring
for sharing information.
The tree and I stand
with light alone.
with light alone.
11 thoughts on "Redwood Spring"
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very nice. from the hilltop spring.
Love the images, Coleman 💙
I really like how intimate this turns at the end, in those beautiful lines “the tree and I stand/with light alone.”
Since your true love is the woods and you live right smack dab in them, you have a constant source of inspiration. I like walking in your footsteps, seeing the world as you see it. It’s swoonworthy. All of it!
I love the quiet reserve, confidence and intimacy of this poem. Good stuff.
your poem hits all the senses
Lovely images and sentiment for a unique space and experience. Thank you.
This is really exceptional. Thank you for bringing me along with you.
Beautiful forest walk!
water shares information
Your poems really center me back to nature where I lived for so many years. Beautiful wording and sentiment!