RELUCTANT VOYEUR
The interruption can’t be helped. Hasty gathering
of coat, presents, the child’s overnight bag.
It’s a thirty minute drive to the treatment center;
passes can be denied if the child is brought back late.
I take a quick, impulsive snapshot of the goodbyes:
Mother and son crumple
into each other,
arms sheathe him,
fingers spread wide across his back.
Her eyes, glazed with fatigue, stare
at the floor. The father’s face
is taut and turned away,
his left hand a muted fist. Remnants
of Christmas dinner are paused on the table, while
their guests strain to look anywhere else. I down
the last vestige of my wine, unsettled
by what I have just captured. This image,
with its web of heartache, is not a candidate
for any family photo album. Yet, I can’t press delete,
can’t deny the visceral tug. I am a corn spider, wrapping
and wrapping its silk around a moth.
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Wow! You packed a lot of emotion and story in this small piece! I love it!
the spinning spider takes a seat at the table.
very nice.
This is heartbreaking and beautiful in its way. The details make it come to life.
I enjoyed this poem, especially that declaration of being “a corn spider, wrapping…”
Really lovely work. You compress so much here
Thank you all so much for your comments!
Masterful, Kathleen. You are such an inspiration!
Well look at that amazing poem you wrote! Wonderful Kathleen!
Tension well built towards that nice ending image! Good one Kathleen!
amazing candor
Very emotionally charged poem. Love that spider! Wonder if you could extend that metaphor or perhaps foreshadow it.
Another meaningful story! You bring us to laughter or tears. Love the ending! You are starting the month off so well!
Not a thing to say, speechless, I nod my kudos.
love the ending
Perfect poem!
Wow! Thank you all so much!
The ending makes the poem’s emotion bearable.
This is a poem comprised of snapshots whose total makes the reader consider their own snapshots around which the corn spider weaves.