Ruminant
I trek Dividing Ridge to investigate
the persistent putter that sputters
across the crest of the abandoned
lane left for dead like a rusted truck.
The gate to Hawks Point off its top
joint creaks in the day’s unexpected
squall of a spring gale and when my
inspect for four-wheel tracks reveals
heavy press of bovine feet through
the Clear Pasture my antennae glow
intense. I‘m incensed: an invasion
of the wildflower field where nature’s
flowers grow for the bread of my dreams.
Dread overcomes dull sense when
the whole herd is heard in full munch
of rare hyacinth and I bound forward
all akimbo to shoo such a cudish
bunch from my coveted treasure.
Alas, Negligent Neighbor shows up
on a John Deere gator, slows to count
his torrid gals and mashes the remnant
Ephemera. Illusion takes a hard blow
from the mobile combustion of his cattle
prattle as high above in the mottled sky
the pulled cinch of a cumulous saddle
unleashes a drench on this Charolais Mush:
Plato’s ideal caves in from the sad deal done
below where delicate bloom is doomed
to the sideways chew of Holy Cows.
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I enjoy this piece. I’m curious to know more about it.
Victoria: I hope the poem speaks for itself, but a little background is that my neighbor’s cows got into our fields where I was trying to nurse the land back to its more original state. After several years of not being grazed, some of our area’s striking wild flowers, like hyacinth, trilium, jack-in-the-pulpet, will return. They are a great pleasure to see so close to home.
kinda feels like shel-silverstein-writes-for-grown-folks… will likely read this one several times. a good thing when a poem continues to draw us back.
Upfromsumdirt:thanks for your kind words. I think in one of your comments you noted that the lineation of your poem was not showing up as you had posted it. Same here and for many others I expect. I did copy-paste from Word and on my android there’s a stanza break and several lines shorter than in the original. The pc and laptop versions are fine. Sometimes accidents make poems better but not here I think.
This poem is sheer pleasure to read! Unique and skillful imagery! Just wow, Jim!
The poem did speak for itself ….very pleasurable reading…..i was incensed about the invasion also!
If you just sat down last night and tossed this off, I’ll be as jealous as my wife’s dog. Odd places anger wanders unexpectedly. Were they really hyacinths?
The bread of my dreams…a cudish bunch…the pulled cinch of a cumulus saddle.A man at one with his land. Wonderful.
Love the love of the land here!
holy cow the rhythm and rhyme of the verse was like Kentucky honeycombs to my allergies, that allegory to Plato’s cave was a nice touch and it’s a shame that happened, what I’ve noticed with a lot of cash-cow livestock owners is that they tend to care for little else other than whether or not their animals are money magnets these days, there are of course many exceptions to this trend but for what I’ve seen that’s what I’ve seen lately
Love the lush detail, the attention you pay to the delicacies of the natural world. The images and repeated sounds make me want to keep reading this poem.
oh Jim~ so sorry about the cows getting into the area you were trying to preserve. but you added such detail to this piece. it’s great!! have a great day~