Safe Keep
redbrownsilkysoftnewlifeflattenshugsearthyloam white spots dull in dusk light
bobcat overstepping walk
nears
earth-fawn shallow-breathes
bobcat claws catch
branch bark
sniffs
fawn heartbeat drops breathing slows
bobcat pads limb length
drops & disappears
in spartina grass
moist nose cooled by prevailing wind notes danger departing
ears erect gather quietness
swivel like radar dishes
catches great-horned owl
stuttering hoo—h’Hoo-hoo-hoo
one high in pitch the other low
liquid brown fawn eyes big bright tapestry passes light twice lashes droop downward with slight curve upward
nose up calls MeeeeeW MeeeeeW MeeeeeW
fierce hoof-thunder breaks darkness vibrates ground under white belly
muscular red-brown full-bodied doe stamps & snorts: Shiii
draws-in fawn scent & soft bleats bé bé bé
fawn wobbly leg-rises finds teat pulls & mews
high-pitched notes like an old screen door opening & whispering
shut on a summer eve
bobcat waits
14 thoughts on "Safe Keep"
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When I saw the body of this poem I’ll admit I felt a bit daunted. But it was well worth the read!
Thanks for staying with it, Regan!
The way you make the page scary is absolutely perfect. The way you speak the soft language of fauna is impeccable and the way this poem felt on first reading, for me was infinite childlike wonder.
Thank you.
Thanks, Coleman! I hoped the page would support how I saw the image, carry the contrast of predator and prey in all its fear and the incredible love and fierceness of the doe for her fawn.
There is amazing energy in this poem, Pam. And then the calming end. Wow!
The fierceness of mothers, yes?
Stayed with it, too and so glad I did. That bobcat waiting feels so ominous.
Glad you did! The reality of nature, yes?
Love this poem, and the form really works for it.
Thanks, Karen! Wasn’t sure the form could be followed but took a leap!
I agree with what others have said–the form works so well with the content.
Thanks, Shaun! It is the way I see the marsh.
Beautifully crafted in form and in words, Pam. It is a fully realized story, set in your careful observation/imagining of the scene…
It must have been hell to format in this LexPoMo box!!
Thanks, Greg! Glad the balance of imagination and observation resonated well.
It was HELL to format this in the LexPoMo box! Thus for 6/12 An American Sentence (VI) today.