… she knows, for M …
I have never forgotten your kiss, and the places we loved, and
Why I loved you, and your head in my arm while we slept;
Where, the years, haunted, easing over to us and clutching
The satin, would whisper our findings to us… and M—
I remembered too the other loves that are gone forever.
It almost hurt, but not as much as this wasting season
Remembering you—long icicles falling off Kentucky barns,
Black snow sloughing off the undersides of cars.
Under the Virgo moon where I met you, I possessed you.
I cannot speak of the whos, or their whats, and then
Their wheres that have happened in the time since,
Or before—for too, they flew— leaving my tree stark, nude.
All I know is I used to sing for them, and for you.
~This poem was adapted from/inspired by Edna St. Vincent Millay (1892-1950)
From her “What lips my lips have kissed, and where, and why.”
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“under the virgo moon when i met you” i love astrology and love when it’s referenced. during virgo moons people are more mentally stimulated, detail oriented, and a little more critical; knowing that, it really adds another layer of emotion
I was think of both the actual season, and the astrological connection regarding Virgo. So glad you mentioned that.
It just so happens she is a Virgo.
*thinking
love ‘long icicles falling off Kentucky barns” –such a good line.
I love the energy and pace of this poem
Nostalgia is a beast and a friend.
I like this sort of call and response. Edna St. Vincent Millay is a treasure – I think she’d like this poem too.
Lovely!