sitting cross legged on the asphalt in a dark parking lot
i.
you are drunk and dumb
and scared of me some
but it’s the curves in the road
that will snatch you in their black
loom against the sky, it is the silhouette
of twilight purple mountain air, the humid hanging of it, the dew before it’s dew
the rank aliveness that will reach its cragged bone fingers
into your stick shift and knock the gears of your guts out and you are swept off
your feet like i wanted to be at every junior high school
dance but it would smite you with a jagged dead kiss
against the rugged hillrock and here i am trying to keep you
from having to feel all that and you say what are you what are you
waiting for?
time
to
pass
ii.
i will not kiss another misanthrope.
my throat knows the sputtery taste of ash
well what you think i don’t know you think
i don’t smell the same stink? did we not
meet in the same fetid alley? shut up
and know there is something after
ragnarok more interesting than this
i am fixed on; ‘behold the great rondure,
the cohesion of all, how perfect.’
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Okay, liking this one the best so far…
from stick shift to dead kiss is on point, I would end at I would not kiss another misanthrope.
I love the first stanza.
This has a good flow. The beginning draws the reader in.
Thank you, Mike–I will consider it. Wasn’t sure about the diptych element in general but hey it’s experiment season. Thanks J.F. 🙂
I enjoyed this poem. Love the line “i will not kiss another misanthrope.”
Thank you, Shaun! Yes that line came out of nowhere and I went with it. Glad you enjoyed the poem.