Skipping Stones II
Skipping Stones II
My happiest days were knee deep in that creek
Skipping stones while listening to cars overhead.
We weren’t supposed to go through the tunnel
Where I could stand up straight under the road.
Where my voice echoed if I dared to speak
Where the darkness stretched forever
Beyond that two lane road lay a primordial world
Every rock and every tree belonging somewhere else.
Where I was the trespasser, wary of dogs who roamed there.
I left behind the dark pools and cascades in the shade
Of mock apple trees, their twisted bows
Lying low and heavy with weird fruit.
I left behind shale shelves lining the creek bed
Ancient libraries holding lessons
Of the fossils and crickets who lived there.
On the other side, the creek was above ground.
Brown leaves lay gently along her slopes
And though she marred the ground,
She did not dig trenches.
The leaves and trees covered her knees like a skirt
Instead of leaving all her bones exposed.
The dogs were free, unbound by fences.
Boundaries marked by other dogs
Boundaries I could not tell
Except for the low barking
Those short fast sentences
Warning away trespassers.
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I can picture this poem so well – great visual details!
I’m so glad you wrote another Skipping Stones poem. I really like the construction of this poem – the repititions and the arch of the poem.
This is so well written and very musical. The details make it come alive.
I really enjoyed this. My favorite part was “Beyond that two lane road lay a primordial world…”
I like the way you recapture a child’s vision. It reminds me of how as children we saw the world as a place of menace and wonder, and wanted to know what was “on the other side.”
great.
Enjoying the progression of memory with stones! Like how you structured with ‘I left behind’ with those words– emphasized the importance of what was left.