Slewfoot Prowls
You fork your way into night, pickled
envelope of humid air and streetlight blur–
the thought of them on your bent-low head
as, smoking, you turn dark again to dark.
When they call your name, you appear–
or maybe this is a dream you both shared
once–smoke and sulphur, the cloven needs
of a pair of bodies brush against each other.
You return to your warren, the hollow
where you keep your bed. In the waning
of the dawn, the world resets itself anew
again. You remember and forget their face.
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Darkly lush language.
Thanks, Joseph!
Tightly packed.
I like the way you ended it.
I am left wanting to read this novel.
Thanks, Coleman! I’m probably going to try this voice for a little bit more too!
The first two lines hooked me. “Pickled envelope of humid air”
Thank you, Chelsie!
This is tight and lush. I like its darkness and its music.
Thanks, Linda! I’ve been experimenting with this persona/voice a little the last couple of days, “Slewfoot,” and trying to figure out that sound exactly
wonderful mood and atmosphere.
Thank you, Dustin!
‘ol Scratch gets around
My whole idea came from the saying, “Speak of the devil…” 😄
“Prowls,” “fork,” “pickled / envelope,” “cloven,” “return to your warren,” “the waning / of the dawn” and of course “slewfoot”: I particularly eye-catching word choices
Thanks, Dr. Bedetti! I’m trying new things somewhat with this voice
“cloven needs/of a pair of bodies brush against each other.” wow! Great mood and images.
Thank you, Bill!
So many rich word and phrase choices. Love the dark mood of this. Great title. Interesting word/idea of “slewfoot,” though I’d never hear of it before, so I looked it up. Thank you for the new word.
Thanks, Karen! I love how it’s both slang for the devil, but also I’ve heard it used for a clumsy person and appreciate that disparity jaha
cloven need of a pair of bodies Yes
Thanks, Pat!
once–smoke and sulphur, the cloven needs
of a pair of bodies brush against each other.
again. You remember and forget their face
Wonderful rich word choices. Love how that last line reads.
Thanks so much, Melva Sue!