Relapse
I smoke with regret. Every pleasurable pull poisonous, the American tobacco stains
to vomit my insides at first, to gag a wave billowing from inside, a cloud—
smoke swallowing, but the smallest payoff, I’m somehow different, then not so small;
different again, then not so restless—pays handsomely. I pay the tobacconist a share,
though there are better days and better living, better times to clear free this dirty crutch.
I could say precious little more. Just that when our son left the faucet running,
she scrambled for phone numbers to contact insurance, in her fingers an old Marlboro
saved for such occasions. Furious at this betrayal, I swiped it from her hands to smoke,
it had been two years. So unbelievably nasty, and so satisfying, like a dominatrix whipping
a guy in a Donald Trump mask, I settled into a calm routine, like walking.
The keys in the ignition, a trip to Circle K, payment in hand, a Vegas sex worker wrapped
in leather straps for a forbidden release, in mentholated Newport pleasure.
I’m still trapped under the whip, and I have my wife freaking out.
The kids are swimming in the hallway, and I am laying down.
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especially love the concise first sentence and the frame of dripping water to kids swimming, and of course the weight of what comes in between
as portrayed, a true story… with, ahem, embellishments
thank you Gaby, good morning
habit on the spectrum-
between relapse and release.
i love the idea/image of smoking under water.
can’tstopwon’tstop
” so satisfying, like a dominatrix whipping / a guy in a Donald Trump mask”— you’ve nailed it.
I’d say she took good care of him!
Manny, you are on a creative run, a tear. Great writing.
Thank you
I agree with Gaby. I love how you framed this poem, and it left me smiling! This poem is….smokin’!
Smokin
Terrific! Captures better than anything I’ve read about this most overlooked addiction. Keep fighting the good fight, brother. That shit will kill you.
It certainly will brother.
Ah, I know this struggle! You’ve captured the impulsive nature of relapse and the self-loathing that inevitably follows. I have 24 days right now–but who’s counting?