Social Obligation
We all sat around dumb as cans,
listening, polite as Sunday School.
Someone threw one pitcher of cocktails around
and we became spouts of whipped cream,
a rush of shushed camaraderie.
In the end, it was all tortured air.
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Aha! Now I’ve discovered one of your secrets – crisp, beautiful similes! Very nice, very funny.
then comical spouts (I see them!)
rush of… (scurrying, swirling)
tortured air Oh, yes, I’ve been here
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“a rush of shushed camaraderie”…..that’s quite a few words! Love this.
I like “dumb as cans”
I love all of this, “dumb as cans” is so good