Something Fishy This Way Comes
Water flows through its toes—
wades in depressions
made in mud and rock face, and
tonight, loons call an all too human trill set sail
on easy fishing round the reeds.
You cast and imagine you cast a camera.
Capture the trout with a few exposures.
A gourmand sears it on film of truffle butter,
opens the foil under hushed, red lights,
finds all to taste—the gentle savor
of a developing palette.
But you are exhaled to a peace
buried by this river in the rise
and rushed call of disorientation,
its slip-grab complications
of whizzing fish darting—
your clothes whisked away by a flood current.
Now you’re naked as a minnow in the dark—
19 thoughts on "Something Fishy This Way Comes"
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i love that i can’t tell the difference here between the stream and the streets. (just like bradbury-at his fever/dreaming best)
(i almost posted one with fishing today too–guess we’re in the same lane)
thank you Dustin, blurring but keeping a stream was the focus
As a Ray Bradbury fan, the title hooked me. 🎣
Get thee to a punnery
🤣
There’s a lovely compressed focus in this piece! Love “its slip-grab complications/of whizzing fish darting—”
it was fun to tighten this one, thank you Shaun
Beautiful, Manny! Your response to Dustin confirms for me that you are developing a new and amazing kind of control over your poems, which is fantastic. The brevity and the couplets help create that crystalline quality. Love it.
thank you sir
It’s a beauty and as Kevin said it’s so cool to watch you work. Naked as a minnow in the dark — whew!
slippery people
You had me with, “Water flows through its toes.” Now that’s a great beginning line! I agree with other. I love how you add to and expand your style choices.
thank you for all the encouragment
Like Linda, I find the sound of the first line seductive
thanks Gaby
Captivating viewpoint
and starkly drawn images and lines.
💜
Love the tension between observing and participating, and the sudden shift from control to vulnerability. The fishing/photography metaphor suggests an attempt to capture or control nature, while the ending reveals nature’s power to strip away human pretenses.
+ Just love how impressive you’ve been.
thank you sir